Replace “holding a compact camera in one hand and a folded map in the other” with “holding the folded map open toward the lens, map markings clearly visible, compact camera hanging from his other hand.” Keep “wide framing,” but add “hands and map sharply readable” so the prop gains priority without losing the full-body rooftop context.

Replace “early evening,” “cooler blue-purple dusk sky,” and “moody twilight atmosphere” with “late golden hour, warm orange-pink sky, lively late-afternoon atmosphere.” Change “partially lit by flash” to “direct bright on-camera flash with warm rim light,” while keeping “film grain” and “slight motion blur” for the digicam character.

Keep the fixed style phrases “candid digicam-style,” “on-camera flash,” “visible film grain,” “slight motion blur,” “gritty streetwear editorial energy,” and “wide framing.” Swap the action phrase “holding a compact camera in one hand and a folded map in the other” for variations such as “checking a disposable camera beside a rooftop antenna,” “leaning over a sketchbook near a water tank,” or “adjusting headphones while looking across the skyline,” while retaining “young man sitting on a rooftop” and the blue-purple dusk palette.