Swap 'soft cozy lighting from a bedside lamp' and 'warm golden tones with deep shadows' for something like 'cool blue moonlight through a window' and 'pale silvery tones with soft shadows.' That single light-source change will shift the whole palette away from the tan/brown result toward blues and grays without touching the pose.

Right now the description splits attention evenly between the two. To push focus onto the woman, add a phrase like 'camera favoring the woman's face, softly out of focus on the man' right after the framing line, and consider changing 'close intimate framing capturing their faces and upper bodies' to 'close framing centered on the woman's face with the man softened in the background.'

Keep 'soft warm golden lamplight' and 'intimate and tender atmosphere' fixed since those are what carry the mood, but swap 'A bedroom at night or early morning' for other spots like 'a porch swing at dusk' or 'a kitchen table with morning coffee.' Adjust the pose language to fit the new setting - 'lying intertwined in an intimate embrace in bed' would need to become something like 'sitting close with hands intertwined' for the porch version.