Replace “wide-shot” with “medium-wide three-quarter shot, woman centered as the dominant subject,” and change “a young woman reclining in a small wooden rowboat” to “a young woman reclining prominently in the center of the frame, occupying most of the boat.” Keep “shallow depth of field,” but add “the swan and distant lily pads softly receding into blur” to reduce competition from the setting.

Replace “a serene, dreamy romantic mood” with “a mysterious, cinematic nocturnal mood,” and change “dramatic low-angle natural light with high contrast” to “cold blue moonlight with narrow shafts of light and deep shadow.” Replace “light cream flowers” with “dark violet flowers” and add “thin mist hovering above the water” for a stronger nocturnal atmosphere.

Keep “small wooden rowboat floating on a lily-pad pond at dusk,” “wide-shot,” “dramatic low-angle natural light,” and “realistic reflections.” Replace “a young woman reclining in a small wooden rowboat, wearing a flowing pale blue dress” with “a violinist seated in the center of the rowboat, wearing a flowing ivory coat,” and replace “a bouquet of light cream flowers” with “an open leather music case and scattered sheet music.”